Maskedklaus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Abercity]

Well, it wasn't bad...

I'm not a huge fan of the stickfight flashes, so take this as you will.

Of the stickfighting flash animations I've seen, most every one progresses like this...hero fights weaklings; hero fights a couple tougher folks; hero fights boss, struggles, wins. There was nothing really outside the mold here for me. Doesn't end there, either...

Background - a couple levels to fight on?! Wowwy zowwy... How about an background that is varied, interesting and can become part of the action (more so that just as a surface for bodies to land against).
Action - Just a little too repetitive for my taste. Lacked too much variety.
Sound effects - Why did it sound like breaking glass when he defeated an enemy? Was that intentional, and if so, I was just curious as to why. Also, some of the sounds were staticy, and I have some decent speakers

Enough complaining! Honestly, your animation was good and I liked a number of the things you did! I just like to criticize harshly, because what is a review for, if not to give creative criticism to the creator (because these reviews certainly aren't for the benefit of the viewers). I could spew meaningless praise, or actually care enough to take the time to write this. I think, if you really put your creative juices to work, you could come up with something original and awesome! Keep up the good work, and strive for excellence!

Jombo1 responds:

Thanks for the great review!

What you (and a lot of other people) have to keep in mind is that stick movies aren't supposed to have a plot. If we wanted a plot, drama, or something of that nature we would add faces and much more detail to the characters. Given that this is a stick movie, and its sole purpose is to make cool looking fights, then there is no need for a plot. This is probably why a lot of people do not like these type of movies, because they have to be "one with the characters".

The action I guess was a little too repetitive, which is why I'll probably be adding a better variety of attacks and the use of weapons for my next Flash. The background is also going to be enhanced.

As for the sounds, in my opinion they're great. There are a lot of stick fights that include the static/glass breaking sound effects and I got inspired by them, and I'll probably keep using them. People have mixed opinions when it comes to these, but I personally like the sounds.

Again, nice review, thanks for your opinion. ^^

[Shrink Me This]

Nothing too new, but fun.

I think I'll start with what I liked and work my way down.

The Animation - I really enjoy your style, and the motion, while all pretty simple, was good.

The Script - It's a little dull and cliché, but gets the job done well enough. The way the shrink reacted when his patient saw the drawing was great!

The Music - While the music didn't overpower the flash, it didn't feel quite right. This may just be my preference, but the music just didn't seem to fit the setting.

The Voice Acting - Well, both of the voices were clear and the sound quality wasn't bad, but the actual acting was lacking. The Shrink was too dull, and sounded like you just used a pitch change to make him sound older. I understand he isn't suppose to be really engaged in the conversation, but he comes off too flat. The patient was better, but still seemed to lack any real degree of emotion. He just sort of hovered around one vocal area the entire time.

Overall, I think you have some good stuff here; it just needs refinement. Keep it up!

jaymanimation responds:

point noted thanks for the feedback. the whole animation was put together in 2 days so i knew it would be lacking in some areas. when i recorded the voices i was acually on my laptop on a headset trying not to wake up my daughter in the same room so i can understand if i couldnt get the emotion they way i really wanted and could do. But yes thank you again I'll keep everything in mind and have a couple more on the way that I hope you will enjoy ^-^

[Captain Planet Strip Club]

Let's-a party! WOOOOOOO!

Lord Almighty, Chris! I never know what to expect from you, and you always manage to surpise me in the best ways possible. Another treat that I just can't stop watching.
I give a 9 because the burning animation and "Some countries haven't..." line weren't perfect, but I'm just being and ass and nit-picking...a lot.
Now, to go party it up with Italy!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

yeh i bet berlusconi would throw an awesome party

[The Legend of Link Part 4]

Enjoyable!

I enjoyed the faster pace of this one over the last, and you had some great writing. I only really had a problem with the voices. At times they seemed a little bored and dull. Even so, it doesn't ruin the flash. Keep up the good work!

Emptygoddess responds:

You just can't understand their subtleties. The subtleties of being bored and dull.

[LoL: Oh Yes And Spiders]

Hmmm...interesting...

I enjoyed the writing overall, though it seemed to drag on and get a little dull at times, unfortunately.
Also, Link's voice reminded me of Garfield from the old cartoon series, and while I enjoy that style of voice, it didn't seem quite right for the part. He sounded too disinterested.
Overall, I would recommend people give it a try, but I can't see watching it more than once.

Emptygoddess responds:

A fair and well balanced review.

Here, have a candy. *gives delicious candy that is un-poisoned and is delicious*

[Silent Herbert]

It's something, but...

While I appreciate the little call outs to fans of SH, along with an appearance from the RE4 guy (best part, btw) it was a little too drawn out, and a lot of the comedy fell flat. Seems like you have a good idea of what to do, you just need a bit of refinement. Keep it up though!

fadedshadow responds:

thank you for the advice, i added too much dialogue and didn't have any action so it was kinda dull. if i do any flashes in the future i'll have more violence and gore. y'know fun stuff XD

[Pleasure Island 2]

I'm watching it again right now!

I'm not one to hand out tens for much of anything, but this was so well animated and voice, and so randomly hilarious, I just can't help but give it anything but a perfect 10. Any video I immediately watch again (3 times) is a damn good video! Your best work yet (and that's saying something).

"...and then I gave it herpes!"

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks v much maskedklaus!

[The Life of Something]

Really?

While I am usually the first person to support something deranged and pointless, there was nothing to really enjoy in all of this. The only reason I am giving you 1/10 is because I feel bad for you. Sorry.

UberMan5000 responds:

I don't need your pity.